Since graduation season is just around the corner, there may be commencement speakers who are starting to write their speeches. I expect that most of those speakers were chosen because of some skill or accomplishment, which indicates they have the capacity to plan ahead and write well.
But for those commencement speakers who like to fly by the seat of their pants and are looking for some last-minute help, here is a handy guide.
The go-to phrase for graduation speeches is something about how the wish is for the students to not just survive, but thrive.
Don’t use that phrase.
I’m sure it wasn’t so bad the first dozen times, but now everyone has tired of hearing it.
My suggestion: find a different word from thrive.
That will throw off the audience. Start with the “not just survive” bit, but change it. Here are some other words that rhyme with survive.
These words might or might not make any sense for your graduating class. But at least the audience won’t tune out the rest of the speech like they would with “thrive”.
Any other suggestions?
The others came out from the city to encounter them, so that they were trapped in the midst of Israel, some on this side and some on that side; and they slew them until no one was left of those who survived or escaped.
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